I'm glad to know some of you are still reading! I didn't expect any of you to stick around because of my almost year long absence!
So, last I was here I think I was still working at the Repertory theatre, right?
Currently I am working at Disney (full time) and Universal (part time) and rowing on Tuesdays and Thursdays and jumping rope on Fridays. Very full, but very good. :)
Saturday, October 11, 2014
Monday, October 6, 2014
Friday, October 18, 2013
First Craft Fair
I just signed up for my first craft fair! Pretty excited about it. Just not sure I can get ready in time with all the things I have to do.
In other news, I finished a round of VE.
The theatre opened Jackie and Me, and it's going well
The costume shop has begun work on Rudolph!
If anyone needs a customized pillowcase, come talk to me. ;)
In other news, I finished a round of VE.
The theatre opened Jackie and Me, and it's going well
The costume shop has begun work on Rudolph!
If anyone needs a customized pillowcase, come talk to me. ;)
Monday, October 7, 2013
Going to Strike
Today the costume and I striked.
A set, that is. :)
We took down Ivy and Bean's costumes and washed and put them away. We did most of them, but some of them will have to be done tomorrow.
Ivy and Bean the musical was the first production I did with the theatre, and I think it went well. While it was running we've been working on costuming for our next production - Jackie and Me. It's about Jackie Robinson and what segregation was like during his time. The theatre does almost all kids shows, since it is a family theatre.
I've also been doing some editing on VE (though not enough. I was just working on it before I started typing this post).
And lots and lots of sewing at home. I've made cockades, hats, pillowcases, and purses!
I still have 3 purses and 6 pillowcases to make as well as a quilt to finish embroidering.
Oh, and I joined a rowing team! It seems like it will be alot of fun. Today was my first day, so we only got to sit in the boat in the shallows and practice technique, but it should get to go out next week =)
A set, that is. :)
We took down Ivy and Bean's costumes and washed and put them away. We did most of them, but some of them will have to be done tomorrow.
Ivy and Bean the musical was the first production I did with the theatre, and I think it went well. While it was running we've been working on costuming for our next production - Jackie and Me. It's about Jackie Robinson and what segregation was like during his time. The theatre does almost all kids shows, since it is a family theatre.
I've also been doing some editing on VE (though not enough. I was just working on it before I started typing this post).
And lots and lots of sewing at home. I've made cockades, hats, pillowcases, and purses!
I still have 3 purses and 6 pillowcases to make as well as a quilt to finish embroidering.
Oh, and I joined a rowing team! It seems like it will be alot of fun. Today was my first day, so we only got to sit in the boat in the shallows and practice technique, but it should get to go out next week =)
Sunday, September 22, 2013
Time To Sell
My Hair, that is.
I found out my hair is worth quite a bit of money, so I'm selling it.
Or, trying to.
I hope it sells quickly! :D
I found out my hair is worth quite a bit of money, so I'm selling it.
Or, trying to.
I hope it sells quickly! :D
Thursday, September 19, 2013
Lonely But Fine
So things have been going well, I think.
I go to work every day and sew all day then come home, play rummikub with my grandmother, sew some more, and go to bed.
All in all. It's pretty lonely. I have to admit I miss my people quite a lot. Makes me want to move back home.
But I will persevere. I have to move out eventually. :)
I go to work every day and sew all day then come home, play rummikub with my grandmother, sew some more, and go to bed.
All in all. It's pretty lonely. I have to admit I miss my people quite a lot. Makes me want to move back home.
But I will persevere. I have to move out eventually. :)
Monday, September 9, 2013
Busy, Busy
So, I don't remember if I told you all about my job.
4 weeks ago or so I moved to Florida and got a car and a job. :)
I looked for sewing jobs online while I was still in Tennessee. I wanted to move to Florida to help take care of my grandmother and to keep her company (Which I've actually been to busy to do lately! Oops). One advertisement was for a costuming internship with the Orlando Repertory Theatre (www.orlandorep.com), it looked like something I wanted to do.I had been looking for an internship for a while.
So I applied, they interviewed me on the phone, and I got the job. :)
My parents were kind enough to drive me down to Florida with all my junk and such and help me find a car to buy.
So I bought a car on a Friday and started work on the next Monday and my parents left on Thursday, and I've been working ever since.
We started and finished a show called Ivy and Bean. It's still playing, but we (the costume shop ) are done working on it until it closes (then we wash everything and put it away). I wish I could show you pictures, but I can't until it closes. :)
Next we're working on Jackie and Me ... and Rudolph. We'll also be working on Aladdin Jr (It's a Kid's Academy show, which is a teaching show. So all the actors will be kids who are paying to learn how to act, etc) There are others we'll be working on this year, too.
Anyways. It's been fun and I'll be working there until April, when my internship is done.
I also found a clogging group (Dancing) I get to dance with every Thursday night after work. Clogging was something I did in Tennessee - I don't remember if I told you all about it.
4 weeks ago or so I moved to Florida and got a car and a job. :)
I looked for sewing jobs online while I was still in Tennessee. I wanted to move to Florida to help take care of my grandmother and to keep her company (Which I've actually been to busy to do lately! Oops). One advertisement was for a costuming internship with the Orlando Repertory Theatre (www.orlandorep.com), it looked like something I wanted to do.I had been looking for an internship for a while.
So I applied, they interviewed me on the phone, and I got the job. :)
My parents were kind enough to drive me down to Florida with all my junk and such and help me find a car to buy.
So I bought a car on a Friday and started work on the next Monday and my parents left on Thursday, and I've been working ever since.
We started and finished a show called Ivy and Bean. It's still playing, but we (the costume shop ) are done working on it until it closes (then we wash everything and put it away). I wish I could show you pictures, but I can't until it closes. :)
Next we're working on Jackie and Me ... and Rudolph. We'll also be working on Aladdin Jr (It's a Kid's Academy show, which is a teaching show. So all the actors will be kids who are paying to learn how to act, etc) There are others we'll be working on this year, too.
Anyways. It's been fun and I'll be working there until April, when my internship is done.
I also found a clogging group (Dancing) I get to dance with every Thursday night after work. Clogging was something I did in Tennessee - I don't remember if I told you all about it.
Saturday, September 7, 2013
Alive and Well
Just so you know, I am alive, and I am well. Just very, very busy. :)
Just finished filling an order for 220 les Miserables cockades, also finished my 4th week of work. :)
Just finished filling an order for 220 les Miserables cockades, also finished my 4th week of work. :)
Sunday, August 4, 2013
Answered Prayers
God's been doing some pretty amazing stuff around here. :)
The move is back on! I'm going to Florida on the 8th!
We had a Dr's appointment scheduled for the 20th, but we were praying (July 30th) there would be a cancellation and I could go sooner. The very next day (July 31st) the Dr's office called and offered me a new appointment for the day after (August 1st)! How cool is that?
We had the appointment and I liked the Dr quite a lot - which is surprising 'cause I normally don't like Drs. :P They seem condescending to me, but she wasn't at all. We were also able to rule some things out and get a diagnosis and medication. She also ordered some more tests to cover all the bases, but we're pretty sure it is Postural orthostatic tachycardia syndrome (POTS). I can't even remember how to say it most of the time.
Of course we're hoping and praying I will eventually get over it, 'cause I can tell you it is a pain to live with. We're going on 8 weeks now. It's manageable, however.
So why am I going to FL on the 8th specifically?
I got a job!
Sort of.
Post about that to come.
The move is back on! I'm going to Florida on the 8th!
We had a Dr's appointment scheduled for the 20th, but we were praying (July 30th) there would be a cancellation and I could go sooner. The very next day (July 31st) the Dr's office called and offered me a new appointment for the day after (August 1st)! How cool is that?
We had the appointment and I liked the Dr quite a lot - which is surprising 'cause I normally don't like Drs. :P They seem condescending to me, but she wasn't at all. We were also able to rule some things out and get a diagnosis and medication. She also ordered some more tests to cover all the bases, but we're pretty sure it is Postural orthostatic tachycardia syndrome (POTS). I can't even remember how to say it most of the time.
Of course we're hoping and praying I will eventually get over it, 'cause I can tell you it is a pain to live with. We're going on 8 weeks now. It's manageable, however.
So why am I going to FL on the 8th specifically?
I got a job!
Sort of.
Post about that to come.
Sunday, July 28, 2013
Remember Florida?
Remember that I was supposed to move to Florida?
You might also have noticed my absence posting here.
Well, the move to FL might be postponed or canceled, depending on some things, and my absence here is related. The past few weeks my health has been extremely poor. I haven't been sick, but I have symptoms that are frightening and we have no answers as to why I'm having them. We're trying to find a general practitioner Dr in our area now (We don't currently have a Dr.), who will see me on a short notice, because I am not doing well at all. Most days I have to stay in bed for the majority of the day.
So please keep me in your prayers if you've a mind to. It would be awesome if God would decide just to heal me and I wouldn't have to go to the Dr., but that might not be in His plan, and we just don't know, so we're moving forward with the Dr. Sometimes it takes 3 weeks to see a Dr. if you're a new patient, and we really don't want that. So also please pray for an expedited process of me getting seen. Thanks. :)
You might also have noticed my absence posting here.
Well, the move to FL might be postponed or canceled, depending on some things, and my absence here is related. The past few weeks my health has been extremely poor. I haven't been sick, but I have symptoms that are frightening and we have no answers as to why I'm having them. We're trying to find a general practitioner Dr in our area now (We don't currently have a Dr.), who will see me on a short notice, because I am not doing well at all. Most days I have to stay in bed for the majority of the day.
So please keep me in your prayers if you've a mind to. It would be awesome if God would decide just to heal me and I wouldn't have to go to the Dr., but that might not be in His plan, and we just don't know, so we're moving forward with the Dr. Sometimes it takes 3 weeks to see a Dr. if you're a new patient, and we really don't want that. So also please pray for an expedited process of me getting seen. Thanks. :)
Tuesday, July 16, 2013
Moving!
I'm moving!
Not the blog. It's staying right here. But me, myself, I, am moving. To Florida.
On a long term/semi permanent basis.
More info later.
Not the blog. It's staying right here. But me, myself, I, am moving. To Florida.
On a long term/semi permanent basis.
More info later.
Wednesday, July 3, 2013
Writing Assignment #3
And here's another one for you. Pretty sure you haven't read this one. :)
I clutched my copy of The House of
Seven Gables, feeling the worn material of the binding beneath my fingers.
Rocking up and down on my toes, I stared at the house in front of me. The
hodgepodge peaked roof with weathered wooden shingles almost fit ‘my’ house, as
I had started calling The House of Seven Gables when I was a kid.
This wasn’t ‘my’ house, but it was
close enough, and I had seen this one many times before. I eyed the Sale Pending notice that dangled from
only one chain on the real estate sign. Interesting. It had been for sale for
so long yet no one had even given it a second glance—until now, apparently. Sale Pending waved in the cool breeze. I
frowned. It wasn’t as though I came by often, I managed a visit to my hometown
only once a year.
Shrugging, I turned away. The house
was one I always admired, despite its dilapidated state. Whoever was buying the
house was buying a ton of work. I tucked the House of Seven Gables into my
purse. It was time to get going. The shop closed at three, and besides, nine in
the morning wasn’t very far away when I still had ten hours of driving ahead of
me. It wouldn’t do to be late for an interview, either.
I turned away and took a few steps
down the cracked sidewalk. The chill wind picked up again, and I buttoned a few
more buttons on my coat, closing it up to my neck. I hurried to where my car
waited at the curb. I tugged on the handle once, but as usual the door didn’t
budge. After a quick kick with my scuffed boot the door popped open.
I slid into the driver’s seat and
turned the key. The engine groaned then rumbled to life. It let out a sigh, as
if saying, “Do we have to?” But once I put it in gear the car chugged
obediently along, leaving the house behind us.
The clock on the dashboard read
2:45. Fifteen minutes to go. The only reason I had stopped in this little town
was to go to the shop, so I had better not be late! The house had distracted me
from my mission. My wondering mind often got me in trouble that way.
My car chugged along a street so narrow
that the sidewalks threatened to invade the road. A few blocks down the road I
stopped in front of my destination—Yum’s Ice Cream. Less than imaginative name, but the owners
made up for it with the crazy flavors and combinations they came up with. There
was one in particular I was craving. Kiwi pecan ice cream—a flavor less than
conventional, in fact, I didn’t know of another place that served it, and so I
got to sample it only when I came into town to visit my parents. I put my car
into park. Visiting my parents. That wouldn’t be happening anymore, and I was
moving on with life.
I stepped out of the car and headed
for the ice cream shop. Kiwi pecan ice cream and then a 9 hour trip to a job
interview and possibly a bright future.
Monday, July 1, 2013
Safely Home
I made it safely home this morning, since my mom so graciously decided to come out and get me from my brother's house (where I was last night). :)
While I was away a snake ate 2 of my chickens. :( Woe for the chickies! He also ate 6 of my sister's chickies. Woe on the snake! Stupid snake.
Fortunately, my dad and sisters caught it and cut off its head, so it won't be eating any more chickies. (It is legal in Tennessee to kill any snake harming livestock. It was harming quite a bit of livestock.)
So now I'm home and getting back into the swing of things.
On the agenda:
Making 16 cockades
9 pillowcases
1 hat
2 purses
6 skirts
and editing my book :)
While I was away a snake ate 2 of my chickens. :( Woe for the chickies! He also ate 6 of my sister's chickies. Woe on the snake! Stupid snake.
Fortunately, my dad and sisters caught it and cut off its head, so it won't be eating any more chickies. (It is legal in Tennessee to kill any snake harming livestock. It was harming quite a bit of livestock.)
So now I'm home and getting back into the swing of things.
On the agenda:
Making 16 cockades
9 pillowcases
1 hat
2 purses
6 skirts
and editing my book :)
Sunday, June 30, 2013
Another Trip - And Home Again
So, I slacked off again. It's a habit of mine. I had an excuse. Again. That happens a lot, too. ;)
I was in Colorado for 9 days! I was finally able to go to my writers' group annual get together/ retreat for the first time since 2008. We had a lot of fun and did some writing, some prompts, etc. I have a couple of more stories to share if anyone is interested =)
Tomorrow I'll be home again and sewing a ton of things!
I was in Colorado for 9 days! I was finally able to go to my writers' group annual get together/ retreat for the first time since 2008. We had a lot of fun and did some writing, some prompts, etc. I have a couple of more stories to share if anyone is interested =)
Tomorrow I'll be home again and sewing a ton of things!
Sunday, June 16, 2013
Another Writing Post
I wrote this little story excerpt back in March, but I thought you all might like to read it.
“This is why we’re not friends!” Timothy ducked behind a
rusty oil drum and held his gun at the ready. A bullet whizzed by his head and
thunked into a barrel nearby. Black liquid spewed from the hole, pooling on the
floor. Another bullet followed the first.
“It’s not my fault!” Andrea’s voice sounded from nearby,
echoing in the warehouse’s high ceiling. “I was told they weren’t active!”
He peered around his barrel. “You were told wrong!”
The whirring noise of a swivel gun turning caught his
attention. The large black machine turned in a 360 above his head. A red light
glowed at its base, a laser seeking out its target.
Oil encircled his feet and started seeping into the fabric
of his shoes. He hissed and looked over his shoulder. The rusted barrels stood
stacked on top of each other almost to the ceiling. A light flickered overhead.
“Uh oh.” Andrea appeared from behind a barrel five feet
away. Long black hairs dangled loose from her ponytail and sweat beaded on her
forehead. She vaulted over a barrel and charged toward him.
The gun whirred again and a spray of bullets flew toward
her.
“Watch out!” Timothy grabbed her arm and pulled her behind
his barrel. Something pounded into his oil drum and pierced his shoulder. Pain
flared in his arm and black liquid spewed onto his arm, soaking his sweat
dampened shirt.
Andrea pushed away from him and crouched low. “Thanks.”
“Anytime.” Grunting, he clutched at his shoulder. “They’re
not going to let us get out of here alive.” Blood flowed from his wound, mixing
with the oil. He closed his eyes for a second and fought off the pain pulsing
in his shoulder.
“Then I’ll distract them.” Andrea pulled a burlap-wrapped
bundle out from under her shirt. “Just make sure they don’t get this.” She
pushed it into his arms. “Otherwise, I’m going to die for nothing.” She stood. Another bullet flew. She flinched
to the side, and it grazed by harmlessly.
He took her hand, forcing her into a crouch. “Don’t be
stupid. We’ll get out of this!”
“They’re in here!” A voice shouted. “The gun’s active.”
“Yeah, it is.” Andrea muttered. “They found us. I wondered
how long it would take.” She drew her hand from his. “You’re hurt. I’m not. I’m
the distraction.” Lowering her voice, she continued. “They’ll turn off the gun
as soon as they come in. That’s our chance.”
Timothy leaned away from the spewing oil. It soaked his
shirt and part of his pants now. His clothes clung to him, and he held the
package away from himself. “Right.”
“Ready?” She peered over the top of the drum.
The swivel gun’s whirr sounded again, and she tensed. The
noise stopped.
A door creaked open. “Drop your weapons and come out with
your hands in the air!” An amplified voice echoed through the room.
Andrea raised her eyebrows. “Are they serious?”
Pain lanced through Timothy’s arm. “Of course they’re
serious.” He stuffed the package down his shirt despite the oil. He would need
both arms free.
She shrugged. “Ready?”
He saluted her. “See
you at the rendezvous.”
“If you do not surrender your arms, we will fire upon you.”
The voice sounded again.
“If I get out of this alive.” She shook her head.
“You mean if they do.” He crawled forward a few feet,
holding his injured arm to his chest. “And thanks.”
“It’s what friends do.” She smirked and pulled a small gun
from her belt.
A shot fired, striking another barrel.
“Hey, over here!” Andrea shouted.
Bullets sprayed across the room.
Timothy ducked his head. Hot pain lanced his back. He
collapsed and squeezed his eyes shut.
“Over here, you idiots!” Andrea’s words sounded desperate
now.
Foggy haze swirled in Timothy’s mind, but he forced himself
back onto his hands and knees—forced himself to go forward. The door. That’s
where he needed to go.
More shots whizzed by his head. He flinched and scuttled
forward.
“There one goes!” A gunshot sounded. Someone shouted in
pain.
Another shot. Andrea screamed.
Timothy reached for the exit’s doorknob and froze.
“Get out of here, Timothy!” Andrea’s words sounded
harsh—forced.
His hands, slick with grease fumbled with the knob. It
turned, and he slipped outside.
Saturday, June 15, 2013
When in Florida
I forgot to mention that when I was in Florida, I got to see 'Miss Margie,' the lady who helped me learn to read.
Some of you know I have dyslexia--and a pretty severe form of it. Because of my dyslexia, I had to receive intense language therapy when I was about 9 - 11 years old. My therapist's name was 'Miss Margie' (Or so I called her), and after I was done with therapy, I didn't see her again until last month. The first time in 11 years, and. . .
I got to give her Precisely Terminated, the first novel I had had published. It was pretty cool, since she has seen me go from not reading at all to reading fluently under her tutelage and now she got to have a copy of the book I wrote.
It was great seeing her again, and I hope it encouraged her to keep teaching--she's still been doing language therapy after so long, and I'm glad. She's a great teacher, and I don't know if I would be where I am today without her help.
Dyslexia and other intellectual learning disabilities come in many forms and severity, but I'm glad there are people like Miss Margie out there to help those of us who have them to overcome and be victorious.
Some of you know I have dyslexia--and a pretty severe form of it. Because of my dyslexia, I had to receive intense language therapy when I was about 9 - 11 years old. My therapist's name was 'Miss Margie' (Or so I called her), and after I was done with therapy, I didn't see her again until last month. The first time in 11 years, and. . .
I got to give her Precisely Terminated, the first novel I had had published. It was pretty cool, since she has seen me go from not reading at all to reading fluently under her tutelage and now she got to have a copy of the book I wrote.
It was great seeing her again, and I hope it encouraged her to keep teaching--she's still been doing language therapy after so long, and I'm glad. She's a great teacher, and I don't know if I would be where I am today without her help.
Dyslexia and other intellectual learning disabilities come in many forms and severity, but I'm glad there are people like Miss Margie out there to help those of us who have them to overcome and be victorious.
Sunday, June 9, 2013
Florida and Back
So during my long absence I sneaked off to Florida and back. Well, not literally sneaked. I rode in the car while my parents drove.
We left TN around 4 PM and arrived in FL at around 8AM the next day. Our first stop was in The Villages, FL to drop my sewing machine and embroidery machine off at a machine repair store (Stores down in FL charge 1/2 as much as those in TN) and then we got to my grandmother's.
Then two days later or so, my niece was born!
Sammie is very cute, of course.
So we stayed another week or so and then my dad had a writing workshop, we picked up my embroidery machine and headed home.
Notice I didn't say sewing machine. It was broken beyond repair, so now I'm machine-less. We were able to buy a used-only-twice machine off of craigslist for $50, but that one is technically my mom's. ;)
So now I'm home again and in the swing of things. Sewing, writing, that sort of thing.
I'll have another writing assignment to share with you tomorrow or so =)
We left TN around 4 PM and arrived in FL at around 8AM the next day. Our first stop was in The Villages, FL to drop my sewing machine and embroidery machine off at a machine repair store (Stores down in FL charge 1/2 as much as those in TN) and then we got to my grandmother's.
Then two days later or so, my niece was born!
Sammie is very cute, of course.
So we stayed another week or so and then my dad had a writing workshop, we picked up my embroidery machine and headed home.
Notice I didn't say sewing machine. It was broken beyond repair, so now I'm machine-less. We were able to buy a used-only-twice machine off of craigslist for $50, but that one is technically my mom's. ;)
So now I'm home again and in the swing of things. Sewing, writing, that sort of thing.
I'll have another writing assignment to share with you tomorrow or so =)
Friday, June 7, 2013
A Writing Assignment
I think I've said before that a writers' group I'm part of puts up weekly writing assignments. Well, I participated in this week's and I thought you all might like to read it.
It hasn't really been edited at all, so just ignore the mistakes. ;)
Here's the assignment
Write a story in the first-person point of view. This means that you will refer to the character as I/me/myself. It's like seeing everything directly through your point-of-view character's eyes. Because of this, the reader can know only your point-of-view character's thoughts and feelings. What's fun about first-person is that the reader experiences the story as the character does. To make this squab even more fun, build your point-of-view character from one of the following options:
-A compulsive liar
-Someone who thinks they're a genius (they may or may not truly be one--that's up to you)
-Someone who likes to explore
Genre: Writer's choice
Goal: To stay in one POV & to explore a POV you may not have used before
Word Count: 500 – 800
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And here's what I wrote
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Rusty nails protruded from the sides of the crates, and dents riddled the surface of the wooden boards. I pressed a finger into one of the small craters in the box’s surface. This dilapidated container was only one of thousands in this warehouse the size of Rhode Island.
I craned my neck and gazed up at the ceiling. Or, I would have, if it had been visible. Darkness covered the area above me, disguising whatever was overhead, but I knew it had to be high. The crates and boxes extended into the oblivion and out of sight.
Discouragement washed over me. How was I ever supposed to map this monster? Even with Fin’s help it would take eternity, and this mission was supposed to last only two months.
Pulling a tablet computer from my satchel, I glanced around the aisles formed by the boxes around me. Perhaps pretending I was an intrepid explorer would help. Some of the adventurers I obsessed about as a child had the most excellent expeditions one could ever hope to have,
Perhaps I would be like Timothy Krislen who mapped a portion of Mars on his one-man expedition of the red planet, or I could be like Adrianna Lemth, who reached the bottom of Marianna’s Trench.
I turned on my computer tablet and the screen flickered to life, displaying a vague map of the warehouse’s layout, some of the lines cut off abruptly, missing sections of walls, as if the person who sketched it wasn’t sure what to put there. Did the room continue on in that part or stop? I squared my shoulders. It would be up to me to find out. Me and Fin, anyway. Where was he?
I scrambled to the top of the crate, careful to put my boots on the thicker slats. Still, the boards creaked under my weight. Raising an eyebrow, I pulled up the 300 page inventory list on my tablet. Hopefully, this crate didn’t contain anything hazardous.
The box must be weaker than I first thought, too. I looked down at my combat boots, laced tight around my calves. Boards splintered under the toes. I clambered onto another crate nearby. It wasn’t as though I weighed a lot – the opposite, actually. I was the smallest on the expedition. My boots even had to be special ordered from a children’s shoe store, and my sea blue uniform had to be taken in by a seamstress near base. But that was all far away now. Thousands of miles. A few light years were more accurate.
I refocused my attention on my tablet. Where was I on this thing? I activated the wireless locater embedded in my wrist. A green light flashed under my skin, glowing dimly in my epidermis.
My tablet shone a corresponding green light. I looked up at the ceiling again, but there still wasn’t anything visible.
I sighed, letting my shoulders relax. At least a wireless receiver was nearby and could see me.
Aliff thought the walls of this room might be too thick to penetrate with our equipment. Apparently he was wrong.
“Hoff?” A deep voice reverberated through the aisles, twisting through the maze of metal and wood boxes.
“Here!” My voice sounded shrill compared to Fin’s.
“We need to get to the hanger.” Fin’s voice sounded far away. “We’ve picked up something on the sensors. We need to be in a more secure room in case it’s hostile.”
“I’m coming.” I jumped from a crate onto the metal flooring—Finished before I even
got a chance to get started.
Something rumbled under my feet. I shut off my computer and tucked it back in my back.
The rumbling came again. I headed for the exit. Who would have ever thought a room this big would ever be discovered on an abandoned spaceship?
I passed in to the cool, metal hallway that ran alongside part of the warehouse. And who would have thought there would be other spaceships that could rival the size of this one?
I shook my head. Who cared ‘who would have thought?’ I was just glad I was around to experience—to be chosen to explore it, even if it was dangerous.
It hasn't really been edited at all, so just ignore the mistakes. ;)
Here's the assignment
Write a story in the first-person point of view. This means that you will refer to the character as I/me/myself. It's like seeing everything directly through your point-of-view character's eyes. Because of this, the reader can know only your point-of-view character's thoughts and feelings. What's fun about first-person is that the reader experiences the story as the character does. To make this squab even more fun, build your point-of-view character from one of the following options:
-A compulsive liar
-Someone who thinks they're a genius (they may or may not truly be one--that's up to you)
-Someone who likes to explore
Genre: Writer's choice
Goal: To stay in one POV & to explore a POV you may not have used before
Word Count: 500 – 800
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And here's what I wrote
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Rusty nails protruded from the sides of the crates, and dents riddled the surface of the wooden boards. I pressed a finger into one of the small craters in the box’s surface. This dilapidated container was only one of thousands in this warehouse the size of Rhode Island.
I craned my neck and gazed up at the ceiling. Or, I would have, if it had been visible. Darkness covered the area above me, disguising whatever was overhead, but I knew it had to be high. The crates and boxes extended into the oblivion and out of sight.
Discouragement washed over me. How was I ever supposed to map this monster? Even with Fin’s help it would take eternity, and this mission was supposed to last only two months.
Pulling a tablet computer from my satchel, I glanced around the aisles formed by the boxes around me. Perhaps pretending I was an intrepid explorer would help. Some of the adventurers I obsessed about as a child had the most excellent expeditions one could ever hope to have,
Perhaps I would be like Timothy Krislen who mapped a portion of Mars on his one-man expedition of the red planet, or I could be like Adrianna Lemth, who reached the bottom of Marianna’s Trench.
I turned on my computer tablet and the screen flickered to life, displaying a vague map of the warehouse’s layout, some of the lines cut off abruptly, missing sections of walls, as if the person who sketched it wasn’t sure what to put there. Did the room continue on in that part or stop? I squared my shoulders. It would be up to me to find out. Me and Fin, anyway. Where was he?
I scrambled to the top of the crate, careful to put my boots on the thicker slats. Still, the boards creaked under my weight. Raising an eyebrow, I pulled up the 300 page inventory list on my tablet. Hopefully, this crate didn’t contain anything hazardous.
The box must be weaker than I first thought, too. I looked down at my combat boots, laced tight around my calves. Boards splintered under the toes. I clambered onto another crate nearby. It wasn’t as though I weighed a lot – the opposite, actually. I was the smallest on the expedition. My boots even had to be special ordered from a children’s shoe store, and my sea blue uniform had to be taken in by a seamstress near base. But that was all far away now. Thousands of miles. A few light years were more accurate.
I refocused my attention on my tablet. Where was I on this thing? I activated the wireless locater embedded in my wrist. A green light flashed under my skin, glowing dimly in my epidermis.
My tablet shone a corresponding green light. I looked up at the ceiling again, but there still wasn’t anything visible.
I sighed, letting my shoulders relax. At least a wireless receiver was nearby and could see me.
Aliff thought the walls of this room might be too thick to penetrate with our equipment. Apparently he was wrong.
“Hoff?” A deep voice reverberated through the aisles, twisting through the maze of metal and wood boxes.
“Here!” My voice sounded shrill compared to Fin’s.
“We need to get to the hanger.” Fin’s voice sounded far away. “We’ve picked up something on the sensors. We need to be in a more secure room in case it’s hostile.”
“I’m coming.” I jumped from a crate onto the metal flooring—Finished before I even
got a chance to get started.
Something rumbled under my feet. I shut off my computer and tucked it back in my back.
The rumbling came again. I headed for the exit. Who would have ever thought a room this big would ever be discovered on an abandoned spaceship?
I passed in to the cool, metal hallway that ran alongside part of the warehouse. And who would have thought there would be other spaceships that could rival the size of this one?
I shook my head. Who cared ‘who would have thought?’ I was just glad I was around to experience—to be chosen to explore it, even if it was dangerous.
Thursday, June 6, 2013
Sewing
I really need to make one of these. Is cute. :)
http://unpetitdesign.blogspot.com/2012/04/kcwcday-one-tiered-ruffle-dress.html
http://unpetitdesign.blogspot.com/2012/04/kcwcday-one-tiered-ruffle-dress.html
Monday, June 3, 2013
What Now?
What now? I have a blog? Really?
Why yes, I do!
Well, something to post. Remember how I said I had some Americana eggs in the incubator two months ago?
They hatched last month!
They're almost all feathered now and all out in the barn again.
And we're about to have another batch of Red Star crosses hatch tomorrow!
Also, I went to Florida. :) More later
Why yes, I do!
Well, something to post. Remember how I said I had some Americana eggs in the incubator two months ago?
They hatched last month!
They're almost all feathered now and all out in the barn again.
And we're about to have another batch of Red Star crosses hatch tomorrow!
Also, I went to Florida. :) More later
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